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Old August 28th, 2005   #1 (permalink)
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This is one of my latest work, a mixed-use development in Jakarta Indonesia. C&C are most welcomed.



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nice nice nice..
especially the lady billboards...
i agree with martin about the horizon..it would have been better if you continued with the blocks. other than that, top work dude.
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Thanks for the inputs, guys.
Martin: It was created using 3dsmax 7, rendered with VRay, and Photoshop touch-up works.
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I actually quite the dackground horizon's but i think the problem is that there is such a difference in the noise on the images. the CG is very crisp and so stands out a mile.

in photoshop try taking the image and duplicating the layer, then add some noise to one of them and blend from foreground to background between the two. i think this will conceal the different elements.

Maybe mask out the tall building too.

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Hope you don't mind.

took the liberty of having a very quick play in accordance with my suggestion.

i think it does improve it but maybe not as much i hoped.

what do you think?
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More ...

Close-up actual pixel shots.





and the train I modelled for this project ...

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very nice, very clear and easy to read. The light is at it's right intensity. Only one thing, it makes a big difference between the realistic model, and the fake background. Maybe a little bit more photoshop integration would be better (with sattelite texture, by example).
anyway good work !
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