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Old January 24th, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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Hai,

This is my first posting and done for an office entrance lobby in dubai

for lighting used only standard lights(omini) please comment on this

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Interesting pic. 2 things that bother me a bit:
1) RPC..... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! You'd be much better off without them!
2) You have some light marking the mirrors...not sure if that really happens.
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How tall are the elevator doors? The size of the people makes them look like 7 feet. In other words, your figures look too big.
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Argh yes I dont like those rpc's tooo. Remove them you have the image much better
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Hai,


Thanks next time i will take care of that

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