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Old April 28th, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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Hi Guys !
This project has just finished,Please comment.Thank so much.
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I like your coffer ceiling light effect and your plants.Could you share how you did that light effect & render engine used?

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The render is nice, I think you should widen the view a little bit, try using other lenses. Things seem to be a bit too close, try tweaking the camera so that the objects get some space "to breathe". I miss the "void" open space between chairs, lamps and others. It's mainly about composition and choosing the right angle and viewpoint. Keep up, your work is good though.
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Overall, I think it has a very nice feel. It appears you may have some lighting artifacts on some of the coffer ceiling surfaces. Also, it's kind of hard to tell for sure, but it looks like there may be a mapping issue with your hardword floor material (particularly the vertical surface). I also agree with Thiago re: the vantage point.
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Thank so much for your comment.
Yes,I agree all your comments.This is mistakes when i render this image.But you know that some times we have not the time to do it better.
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looking great. You need to lower the entensity of the light on your column.
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Thank so much Cain!
Here is a another option,hope you like it.But i would say i hate the railing.one more mistake when rendering.
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