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Re: Master Bedroom and Lobby
Nice images. My only crit would be that the general white colour makes it feel very cold. Could do with just a very slight hint of red/yellow - but thats just my opinion.
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Re: Master Bedroom and Lobby
I like the rendering, its comming along nicely, but I don't like that ceiling, thats just my personal opinoin, the home seems to be traditional and that just confuses it, again that's just my own feeling, keep up the good work...
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Re: Master Bedroom and Lobby
Hello
ceiling is not either of my taste but it is the taste of the owners of the project. The colour i agree with your opinion, I am going to prove something but warm. thanks |
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Re: Master Bedroom and Lobby
Hall is comming along nicely, maybe put a carpet in the walk way or near the door, I though how it would look if you just sliced the top and bottom of, there is nothing much happening there.
The bedroom is nearly there, too dark if you would ask me. Maybe you intended it like that, but I would get some sunlight in and open some curtains. |
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Re: Master Bedroom and Lobby
I also think that both images are far too dark.
The bedroom has lights on near the bed, in such a dark room these lights would have a more profound effect on the area. I think you would benefit from lighting it up and warming it up, tint your light a very slight yellow Last edited by mahorela; May 3rd, 2006 at 04:41 AM. |
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Re: Master Bedroom and Lobby
Excellent! much better.
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