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Old January 27th, 2004   #1 (permalink)
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I am slowly learning Max but have just finished this project in MicroStation. I thought I would post it as it is done in a package that isn't mentioned here very often.

Un-fortunetly I only had 3 days to do the image, so the Particle Tracing solution is a little blotchy in places, but there isn't much I could do about that as time didnt permit. Also all the flowers were done in Photoshop.

I am aware that the background image is winter and a lot of the flowers are in summer bloom but its not easy trying to find pictures of flowers during the winter months on short notice.

Please critise!

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I know you already know this, but it does look weird with the summer (almost tropical)plants and the cold winter sky. I know its not easy to find plants on short notice, but I almost think the image would do better without them in this case.

The children are having the same problem - the kid on the right with the green sweater looks ready for a polar expedition compared to the boy playing football....

oh, this is just me, but I would make the big branch coming in from the left a bit smaller...

Other than that - good work. its hard to make amazing work in only three days time, but overall it looks good.
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Yeah its difficult to find pictures of kids in 3 days as well. Obviously these days you can't take photos of them so you have to try and find them in magazines and stuff!

The flowers and small pond behind it were park of the submission they wanted a kind of sensory garden at the very for-front of the image!
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