Main Lobby Office Building

Yadi Krisnadi · July 5th, 2006

Hi, this is my work of lighting study. Please comment that can improve the image?

Thank You.
Yadi
3dlight

NOOXY · July 5th, 2006

this is a very good image..nice camera angle, gives your the feel of the vast lobby...i like the lighting as well.image is a bit jagged probably low aa or low settings...but overall very well done

jophus14 · July 5th, 2006

What software and render time please.

Zeilveen · July 5th, 2006

Like the pic, indeed. I dont know how to improve it but I can tell you what came to my mind while looking at your image for a while

- little colour in the lobby, mostly grey,maybe use some big vern greenies or artwork on the wall
- the left side of the picture is abit hard for me to read, I like to understand the structure but the colours and reflection are competing in that area, maybe use some shadow or something,?

Ronald

Yadi Krisnadi · July 5th, 2006

Thanks to all of you for your inputs.

NOOXY: Yes it little bit jagged, may be because I compressed it.
jophus14: I use Maxwell V.1, it tooks 17 hr @ 1200x800.
Ronald: I agree with you, its seem need "something" to make alive.

Cheers,
Yadi
3dlight

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Yadi Krisnadi Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Jakarta Posts: 39 Name: Yadi Krisnadi	Main Lobby Office Building Hi, this is my work of lighting study. Please comment that can improve the image? Thank You. Yadi 3dlight

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NOOXY Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: CASTRIES Age: 29 Posts: 761 Name: DANNY MARCION	Re: Main Lobby Office Building this is a very good image..nice camera angle, gives your the feel of the vast lobby...i like the lighting as well.image is a bit jagged probably low aa or low settings...but overall very well done __________________ I had a dream & now it's just another rendered image:D

July 5th, 2006	#3 (permalink)
jophus14 Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 764 Name: Joseph Skowron	Re: Main Lobby Office Building What software and render time please.

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Zeilveen Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Ferwert Age: 37 Posts: 396 Name: Ronald Zeilstra	Re: Main Lobby Office Building Like the pic, indeed. I dont know how to improve it but I can tell you what came to my mind while looking at your image for a while - little colour in the lobby, mostly grey,maybe use some big vern greenies or artwork on the wall - the left side of the picture is abit hard for me to read, I like to understand the structure but the colours and reflection are competing in that area, maybe use some shadow or something,? Ronald __________________ ZN DESIGN & VISUALISATION Ronald Zeilstra - Urban Designer

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Yadi Krisnadi Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Jakarta Posts: 39 Name: Yadi Krisnadi	Re: Main Lobby Office Building Thanks to all of you for your inputs. NOOXY: Yes it little bit jagged, may be because I compressed it. jophus14: I use Maxwell V.1, it tooks 17 hr @ 1200x800. Ronald: I agree with you, its seem need "something" to make alive. Cheers, Yadi 3dlight

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