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Old July 5th, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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Hi, this is my work of lighting study. Please comment that can improve the image?

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this is a very good image..nice camera angle, gives your the feel of the vast lobby...i like the lighting as well.image is a bit jagged probably low aa or low settings...but overall very well done
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What software and render time please.
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Like the pic, indeed. I dont know how to improve it but I can tell you what came to my mind while looking at your image for a while

- little colour in the lobby, mostly grey,maybe use some big vern greenies or artwork on the wall
- the left side of the picture is abit hard for me to read, I like to understand the structure but the colours and reflection are competing in that area, maybe use some shadow or something,?

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Default Re: Main Lobby Office Building

Thanks to all of you for your inputs.

NOOXY: Yes it little bit jagged, may be because I compressed it.
jophus14: I use Maxwell V.1, it tooks 17 hr @ 1200x800.
Ronald: I agree with you, its seem need "something" to make alive.

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