Entrance Lobby

cssony · July 6th, 2006

hai guys

here i am sending my latest work which is in progress ...

all type of C&C are welcomed

gadzooks · July 6th, 2006

very Nice! The 3rd image ROCKS! My only cc is that the plants look over saturated in relatshionship to the space. Other than that outstanding job.
Gadzooks

cssony · July 7th, 2006

nooooooooo further replay??????????

jafs00 · July 7th, 2006

great work, I like the lighting, the texturing and modeling.

The only thing that sort of looks off to me are the bricks in the first and second image, they seem too large. Try scaling them down a bit.

cssony · July 7th, 2006

thank u very much kenny and julio

thanks for replay
even i also feels like that i will check and clear it

regards
sony

Kurt · July 7th, 2006

Some minor stuff: the water surface has the same ripples all over, even though the water seems to be divided into separate "chambers" by stone walls. And there are some strange shadows(?) on these chamber walls which I don't really understand. I think you also should bevel the edges on these walls to make them look less "artificial"
Otherwise: nice rendering.

kulbir bal · July 8th, 2006

coooooooooool stuff man..........keep it up

STRAT · July 8th, 2006

nice 3rd image. the plants saturation and lighting dont match up the rest of the image properly in the other 2, and whats going on with that far wall's brick/stone texture? the texture seems to dissappear where the lights are.

crz_06 · July 8th, 2006

nice, but some remarks
(first image)
background images is way of, the road starts at the form door, and the perspective is of.

plants are to artificial, play with saturation and transparency a bit

(second image)
try using IES lights behind counter, these ones look to fake. The hotspot is to present. Actually all lights whcih replect on the walls seem a bit fake

(3rd one)
Impressive, really life like. (maybe turn the black shadow a bit down at the ceiling. Maybe the chrome column can be a little less reflective (maybe use a falloff map instead)

cssony · July 8th, 2006

Thank u very
much for valuable replay

regards
sony

July 6th, 2006	#2 (permalink)
gadzooks Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Atlanta Ga Age: 42 Posts: 19 Name: Kenny Syverson	Re: Entrance Lobby very Nice! The 3rd image ROCKS! My only cc is that the plants look over saturated in relatshionship to the space. Other than that outstanding job. Gadzooks

July 7th, 2006	#3 (permalink)
cssony Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Dubai Posts: 126 Name: sony sebastian	Re: Entrance Lobby nooooooooo further replay??????????

July 7th, 2006	#4 (permalink)
jafs00 Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: guatemala Age: 35 Posts: 144 Name: julio fonseca	Re: Entrance Lobby great work, I like the lighting, the texturing and modeling. The only thing that sort of looks off to me are the bricks in the first and second image, they seem too large. Try scaling them down a bit.

July 7th, 2006	#5 (permalink)
cssony Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Dubai Posts: 126 Name: sony sebastian	Re: Entrance Lobby thank u very much kenny and julio thanks for replay even i also feels like that i will check and clear it regards sony Last edited by cssony; July 8th, 2006 at 05:36 AM.

July 7th, 2006	#6 (permalink)
Kurt Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Oslo Posts: 93 Name: Kurt S...	Re: Entrance Lobby Some minor stuff: the water surface has the same ripples all over, even though the water seems to be divided into separate "chambers" by stone walls. And there are some strange shadows(?) on these chamber walls which I don't really understand. I think you also should bevel the edges on these walls to make them look less "artificial" Otherwise: nice rendering.

July 8th, 2006	#7 (permalink)
kulbir bal Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: punjab Age: 31 Posts: 130 Name: kulbir bal	Re: Entrance Lobby coooooooooool stuff man..........keep it up

July 8th, 2006	#8 (permalink)
STRAT Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Cardiff, Wales, UK. Age: 37 Posts: 6,881 Name: Stephen Leworthy	Re: Entrance Lobby nice 3rd image. the plants saturation and lighting dont match up the rest of the image properly in the other 2, and whats going on with that far wall's brick/stone texture? the texture seems to dissappear where the lights are. __________________ http://www.buzzbox.eu/

July 8th, 2006	#9 (permalink)
crz_06 Junior Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: rotterdam Posts: 10 Name: deiederik van veen	Re: Entrance Lobby nice, but some remarks (first image) background images is way of, the road starts at the form door, and the perspective is of. plants are to artificial, play with saturation and transparency a bit (second image) try using IES lights behind counter, these ones look to fake. The hotspot is to present. Actually all lights whcih replect on the walls seem a bit fake (3rd one) Impressive, really life like. (maybe turn the black shadow a bit down at the ceiling. Maybe the chrome column can be a little less reflective (maybe use a falloff map instead)

July 8th, 2006	#10 (permalink)
cssony Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Dubai Posts: 126 Name: sony sebastian	Re: Entrance Lobby Thank u very much for valuable replay regards sony

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