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Re: Water lily
very nice, but i'd say as they stand they're way way too big.
look at the size of the leaves and flowers of the lilies to the hut. also, the hut could do with some better non tiling texturing. great so far though  |
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Re: Water lily
I like it, it looks like the reflections in the water are made from geometry, and I reading the wireframe wrong?
Work up the play of lighting and it will be even better JHV |
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Re: Water lily
Nice scene, lot of work to make it look nice this way. Just a few little things, your scene looks very saturated, specialy the water, maybe you can tone down the colours a little bit.
Also the wave ripples look a little small to me, but they are very nice. Cheers Ronald |
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Re: Water lily
i like it but my eye kept drawing to the fact to can see the small window throught the window it looks like the nature channel is on a little tv inside the house.
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