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Old December 2nd, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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Hey guys finished it at last thanks to all the c&c..originally posted as a WIP but i think I'm happy with this one but C&c still welcomed..

will post more views of the room soon.


hey tent modells were all from archmodels.was just trying to strengthen my composition and lighting skills.
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I love green!!!!Neat work!
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I love green!!!!Neat work!
Uhhhmmm... I think I like it all too! Just one more thing, the beams' wood mapping seems unreal, also wood grain orientation, as far as wood is concern. Is the intention is wood?

but overall, its a great work, man!
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there's too much going on in there to make me happy me thinks :/

the rendering is nice (appart from the floating green chair on the left) but it's too busy for comfort maybe. less is more usually. what are those diagonal squaggly lines on the curtain/window areas?

also, your brown table seems to be reflecting on the left hand side, but not on the right hand side. if it were reflective you'd see the green chair reflected. or is the on the left not a reflection?
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nice !!

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thanks guys for all the c&c still have a few buds in it but it's something I'll sort out later. Still working on texturing and coposition i think i'm getting confortable with lighting my scenes...thanks again
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Like the window wall and curtains, they look super! Light is falling in nicely and than I dont know where to look because its crouded in there. If you just take out that table and two chairs on the right the room would look much more styled and modern in a way :-)

Im just fishing for more renders :-))

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very nice
i think the wood needs some work

could you share your settings for the curtains in terms of modeling and texturing?

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I guess it's a bit too busy..kinda went over board on the DECO ...Ima post some more stuff soon..every Item on the scene is from archmodels so I didn't model any however the texture on the curtain is just a simple colored mat with some bump and transparancy.
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