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dave!!!! nice to see you m8.

 

i always love seeing ur work! i see it be posted in the cinema 4d forum too. why not go there and post up some cinema tips for us. i know your knowlege on the subject outweighs all the books ever made on the subject:)

 

nice wip so far, just 1 main comment at the mo -

 

personally not struck on all that brown stuff, and it tiles somewat.

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Hi dave,

 

just three things slipped my mind:

 

- get rid of the tiling in the ceiling ;)

- the black lines in the floor - I don't know the english word for it - should be a bit smaller

- crop your image (keep the upper part) [you don't need that much tiles on the floor and

your horizon won't be at the middle of you image anymore]

 

love to see more

 

nisus

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