Neha Kakkar - WIP (May 11)

[Neha Kakkar]

I'm done with most of the modeling. I have to detail out some areas, fix up some parts of the new gates, some more work left in the garden too. But this is what I have in mind for the final camera angle and the composition.

Please ignore the burnt out areas, they look this way because I was using a white override material while working on modeling and composition...this level of lighting looks fine with textures.

[Brian Clark]

Very clever using the different pieces of the model to fill up the space. How do you plan to do the vegetation? I think this has a lot of potential to fill up with lush plants and such.

[Neha Kakkar]

Thanks Brian. I've designed the garden just like a typical mughal garden. Due to the white material its not very evident now. The plantation is very controlled and systematic in Mughal gardens...

[Russell Thomas]

Very impressive looking so far Neha, this looks right up your alley

[Neha Kakkar]

Thanks Russell...I'm enjoying this a lot

[miaomiao lin]

The garden that the fortress becomes you, continue your first viewpoint, would be more fine.The small post of the right side seems to be too fragmentary apparently

[Aaron Coon]

This is coming along. I really think the composition is near perfect. The one thing that bothers me about your added model is the repetition of the small guard house elements on top of the wall on the right. The large element in the wall balances nicely with the main buiding without competing too much. However, the smaller repetitive elements are too busy and are a distraction for me. Great work, keep it up.

[Neha Kakkar]

Thanks for the suggestions Aaron & miaomiao. Aaron, although this kind of structure is common in Mughal palace walls, for the purpose of this composition you are correct, I'll model a simpler design for top portion of the boundary wall.

[Patterlini benoit]

very good job, when there will be trees and textures, it looked great...
benoit.

[Neha Kakkar]

Thanks benoit

An update...