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Old May 13th, 2007   #1 (permalink)
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Hey Guys just something I made to test some light settings using Vray Sun and Sky. Any comments would help. The model I did at work and brought it home to render it, the trees are xfrog. Peace.




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can you post ur settings for vray sun and sky,,,im learning howto use it but i cant seem to make the sky work,,,and did u use vray cam???sorry for the questions im just really impressed with ur work
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What strikes me when i look at the image, is that the house looks like you rendered it with an alpha map and changed the background sky in Ps. With that overburned exposure, the sky in vray would probably be white. Even when i squint my eyes a little that feeling still remains...

As i said its burned and oversaturated - check out the grass it does not pair with the nuclear building walls... knock the exposure off a little... im talking about the area above the garage door - it looks like you have a wall matrerial with high specular applied...

Either that or its very early and i havent slept all night.... again

The grass tiles a little bit - the displacement didnt hide it 100% but im probably being picky now...

Like the model the grass and the curtains inside the house...
You could add a car and some ppl.... maybe some plants??

Is that dirt or shadows near the plants? If their vines then... vine them up, a little more...

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Default Re: House Exterior.

To answer your questions Horhe, everything was rendered in max with vray, no post work what so ever.I think the color of the house makes it appear oversaturated. Its almost plain white, I could change the color, maybe that will help. Plus I just noticed the grass, there is an area I have to fix. I didn't add a car yet because I only did the test for lighting purposes for my work(so that we can get vray 1.5). Thanks for the comments though.

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