Bryan Jumarang - WIP

[Bryan Jumarang]

Hello guys... been busy lately... anyway im posting my update for my scene. my first colored trial. cheers..

[Julie Hsieh]

Wow...with material it really comes alive! The atmosphere has a good feel to it and lots of action going on to illustrate your story, but if I have to think of a critique, I would say that this is precisely your challenge, because there is so much going on, it makes the image feel a little bit busy for me.

For one example,say your sky is so nice but then it seems to compete with your work. In another instance, I feel that your main building is so nicely done but the very brightly lit interior of the basement level steals attention away from it. I almost want to tone that the overall brightness level of the surrounding context down so that it has more of a contrast and make a balance of focus on one central area of your image rather than everywhere.

I think I am sorta having similar struggle with mine actually...but I digress.

[Indranil Ray]

Very nice busy evening but the textures are too clean......

[Neha Kakkar]

Lovely work, especially the attention to details! But I would agree with Julie that there is a lot going on there to eshtablish the view's focus at one place. Perhaps if you use DOF, this will bring your building into focus.

[Lu JinLong]

Hi enigma
The whole effect is very good. But I think the lighting controlling is a little messy, so that the visual centre of the whole image is not distinctive.
I think you can handle the lighting from strong to weak in turn: the church—>the glass near the stairs—>the relative area along the river—>bank of the river—>the plaza outside the church—>sky. The levels of the lighting will be better. Just my own opinion.

[Zoltan Kovacs]

Wow, you don' need to sleep? You're fast. Anyway things are really starting to compete here for our attention, that's true. And what seems to be a bigger problem here, is different lighting of the different parts of the picture: (1) sky is right after sunset, we should see basically everithying without artificial lighting at that time; (2) the horizontal middle part is dawn, (and is a great dawn for sure), and the lower right corner at the coffee shop is dark night. Try to bring lights together, I know you can... (And sg else: what does so many people do here at this time? At what time? I am getting lost uhhhhh ))

[Ernesto Pacheco]

Nice update Bryan. I really like the atmosphere in your scene. Also the monochromatic color scheme that you choose is very interesting. I don't know if I like the 3D guy on the left nor the horse. Also, the hase on the left is a bit strong.

[xianfang liu]

Hi Bryan Jumarang,You have to pay attention to two points: 1. The clouds in the sky is too Parallel to the horizon. 2.The lights of the playground is too balance, maybe should make some changes! Good luck!

[Harold Francisco]

..Looking gr888t....

There.. All the best to you..buddy.

[Patterlini benoit]

great artwork...The lights are awsome... and now it is not monochrome..
congrats...