Miao miao Lin Story Board

[miaomiao lin]

Hi,everybody
This is my story board
please comment on

[Brian Clark]

Hello, my first reaction would be to show the architecture more. I like how you are building up the environment shots, but more shots of the building would help I think.

[Ernesto Pacheco]

I agree with the previous comments. It would be nice to see more of the building. Also, I am wondering what happen to all that ice and snow from your final still submission.

Ernesto

[miaomiao lin]

Hello, my first reaction would be to show the architecture more. I like how you are building up the environment shots, but more shots of the building would help I think.

2,3,4,5.and 8 all mainly illustrate the architecture,only adding more environmental factors to make the building more vivid and lively

[miaomiao lin]

I agree with the previous comments. It would be nice to see more of the building. Also, I am wondering what happen to all that ice and snow from your final still submission.

Ernesto

the still rendering expressed the consequence hunman beings would encounter if we continue destroying the earth. The animation want to give the warning before the snowstorm coming,
which is more close to our life. I will not intentionlly show the ice and snow in the animation since it is there in the still rendering

[miaomiao lin]

[quote=miaomiao lin;165841]The still rendering expressed the consequence hunman beings would encounter if we continue destroying the earth. The animation want to give the warning before the snowstorm coming,which is more close to our life. I will not intentionlly show the ice and snow in the animation since it is there in the still rendering

[miaomiao lin]

Thank, comment on

[Bryan Jumarang]

Wow, this will turn out so great for sure! with all these sequences and effects integrated! Good luck miao miao!

[Lukasz Truchalski]

Hej!

I'm a little afraid that it is too risky to run so far avay from Your first_challenge final_submision. (great picture). I think that it would be welcome to show (for example) frozing grass at the final. It is only my opinion.

See U

[xianfang liu]

Hi Lin,You are great ! Come on! Best wishes to you!