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    Hi,everybody
    This is my story board
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    Hello, my first reaction would be to show the architecture more. I like how you are building up the environment shots, but more shots of the building would help I think.

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    I agree with the previous comments. It would be nice to see more of the building. Also, I am wondering what happen to all that ice and snow from your final still submission.

    Ernesto

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    Quote Originally Posted by BR1AN View Post
    Hello, my first reaction would be to show the architecture more. I like how you are building up the environment shots, but more shots of the building would help I think.
    2,3,4,5.and 8 all mainly illustrate the architecture,only adding more environmental factors to make the building more vivid and lively

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    Quote Originally Posted by CHE View Post
    I agree with the previous comments. It would be nice to see more of the building. Also, I am wondering what happen to all that ice and snow from your final still submission.

    Ernesto
    the still rendering expressed the consequence hunman beings would encounter if we continue destroying the earth. The animation want to give the warning before the snowstorm coming,
    which is more close to our life. I will not intentionlly show the ice and snow in the animation since it is there in the still rendering

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    [quote=miaomiao lin;165841]The still rendering expressed the consequence hunman beings would encounter if we continue destroying the earth. The animation want to give the warning before the snowstorm coming,which is more close to our life. I will not intentionlly show the ice and snow in the animation since it is there in the still rendering

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    Thank, comment on

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    Wow, this will turn out so great for sure! with all these sequences and effects integrated! Good luck miao miao!
    WIP...

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    Hej!

    I'm a little afraid that it is too risky to run so far avay from Your first_challenge final_submision. (great picture). I think that it would be welcome to show (for example) frozing grass at the final. It is only my opinion.

    See U

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    Hi Lin,You are great ! Come on! Best wishes to you!

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