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Old June 1st, 2007   #1 (permalink)
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Hi guys, heres a recent one i did for a friend, it was an urgent job done overnight. anyways i thought i'd share with you despite some few mistakes here and there.. C&C is always welcome.

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It's really nice. My CC would be that the displacement map on the floor is too heavy, it makes it look out of place with the rest of the finishes. On my monitor the lights look green, like a photo of florescent bulbs. Good job!

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I always marvel at your texture work Roland.

great stuff as usual
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I always marvel at your texture work Roland.

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no doubt about it and i always envy your wooden flooring
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no doubt about it and i always envy your wooden flooring
Interesting. I thought the wooden floor looked like it came out of a fifty year old wherehouse building, I don't think Ive ever seen a new wooden floor with grooves that deep. What ever.

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Bob and Ali
thanks for the comments guys..

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I agree with the floor grooves, you really cant see much detail when you're test rendering low cause of time. anyways, thanks a lot dude.
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amazing as usual....

good work man...keep going.........
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i dunno about the rest of you, but it think there is too much light for the room to be relaxing. During most of my massage sessions lighting is kept to a comfortable level. I would tone down or remove the perimeter lighting all together. I agree the image is beautiful it just seems to be as bright as an examination room, not a relaxation room. the rock and candles under the bench is an awesome touch.
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Nice texturing, nice lighting, nice render!
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