Amer Abidi - WIP

[Yasmin Hakki]

fear grows in darkness; if you think there's a bogeyman around, turn on the lights.

[Yasmin Hakki]

hmmm,, funny a lot of you mentioned in your comments about not knowing whether its a moon or sun. I think in Jordan our skies are pretty clear and the moon does shine that bright and is that big and sometimes has a gorgeous yellow/orange colour. But maybe amer you should've looked into the moons effect in spain, I also agree with Koper and Horhe, there should be more lighting going on in the gardens and I would like to see more activity around the lighthouse, but I suppose you were all pressed with time.
Btw on the moon note, I have attached an image of the moon that I took with my phone camera just for you to see what the moon looks like here. its that shinning sphere in-between the two hideous buildings and thats not even it at its best! Oh yeah, the sun and the moon shine bright in the desert skies!

[amer abidi]

true! true! =)

[elif serencio]

Hi
I was reading your thread and I like the very first sketches much and they have very sculpturesque form- especially underlining the effect of the tower and welcoming.
But on the last sketches things start to get compete with lighthouse tower and moreover kind of integrating into it.
Of course this can be one approach but I prefer the 1st one more

[amer abidi]

Thanks Giraffe, yeah i doubt my camera angle was the best choice, since i trieds to show off as much of what's going on as possible in one image... I am however very pleased with the design, and will continue to post WIPs throughout to the end.

hope you follow and crit occsionally!