pawel mysiorek - final

[Antisthenes]

i like it

[Pawel]

Hollow:
1. i like you my design
2. flat sheet of glass don't magnify, except that we live in air-conditioning era, so you can imagine whole building air-conditioned, even with its large cubature.

[Pawel]

Amber:
1. sun angle was a tough choice. I wanted it to lit interior that's why i placed 3d "sun" on the right side of camera. If you place it on the other side you may get more interesting results but i'm afraid that interior would stay dark.
2. thanks

[Pawel]

Bwana:
1. thanks
2. half CG, half photo

[Pawel]

C.klaassen:
1. good news - my goal was to make it look "real"
2. even better news!

[am34012]

I like the complexity of the structure, it can be a very powerful feature in your animation!

[chutti]

Great job Powel!! i feel really comfortable with this image. very friendly and appropriate design. like your violin player so much. peoples are a little strechy though.. but works really well. bird composition is cool. i've noticed few things on your image which is, blending of your site with the landscaping is not done correctly. the fineness is missing. u could have use some transition bush, long grass or foliages to make it more convincing. its a challenging job though. one more thing, maybe your tower top is missing if am not mistaking which is not cool.

Top job over all. Good Luck!!

[chutti]

Great job Pawel!! i feel really comfortable with this image. very friendly and appropriate design. like your violin player so much. peoples are a little strechy though.. but works really well. bird composition is cool. i've noticed few things on your image which is, blending of your site with the landscaping is not done correctly. the fineness is missing. u could have use some transition bush, long grass or foliages to make it more convincing. its a challenging job though. one more thing, maybe your tower top is missing if am not mistaking which is not cool.

Top job over all. Good Luck!!

[chutti]

oopps double posts....sorry...

[CHE]

Pawel,

Your design is simple but very effective. I really appreciate the attention to detail. I am glad you moved the original location to somewhere closer to the tower. It is hard to make people look good and with purpose in a rendering but I think that you have succeeded to do so here. I think that your composition could have been improved by rotating the camera a bit to the left so that you have the tower on the upper right corner and your design on the bottom left corner with the path connecting both in between but that is just me. Also, you could have use some color, atmospherics or more contrast to accentuate the different parts of the rendering and give it some depth. Right now it feels a little flat almost 2D.

I am looking forward to seeing your animation. Good luck!

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