Remodeling of the beach house in the city

[mikacool]

Hello that is the first proposal for this house, in the next days i will post the evolution.

 

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/7863/88827739uy1.jpg

[Dave Oliver]

the water in the tiles is a cool idea but it is kind of confusing when you first look at it.

 

because of the color saturation and level of detail compared to the rest, the car draws too much attention right now in the composition.

 

if you had some kind of detail articulating the structure it would look a lot nicer, even things like metal cap flashings along the roof, exterior lights, control joints in your eifs stuff. only takes a couple extra minutes to do some of those things

 

is there a way to increase the diameter of the hanging ivy stems? it looks like confetti in some places at the moment

[mikacool]

Thanks for your coments,

thanks for your commentaries, the house was changed, but I will take into account your commentaries.

 

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/2673/13yi6.jpg

[mikacool]

The house change.