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Re: Exterior "Quiosque"
awesome Image
maybe scatter a few of The Tree's 'petals' on The ground The concrete sidewalk seems To project out into space without some kind of support (on The right) The background sky seems a bit at a lower resolution Than The rest of The Image, but what are skys for?? The sun light 'burst' behind The Tree seems a bit Too radial maybe just a bit more parallel at That distance The sunlight might not be diverging so much The right-most roof plane should be more in shade (?) There seems To be some kind of (invisible) Light source at The bottom of The structural wood 'columns', not sure where This is coming from ? nice grass well done Last edited by vizwhiz; June 30th, 2009 at 12:19 AM. |
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Re: Exterior "Quiosque"
Yep.. not a bad image....
But what is going on with that tree....? It looks like some sort of biblical burning bush..!! It is seriously drawing all attention away from the rest of the image. The lighting looks a little hard.. Doesnt seem to be many soft looking areas etc...
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Re: Exterior "Quiosque"
Hi guys, thanks
 vizwhiz, thanks. The petals idea is fine, but I dont have more time for this project. Has been send today. The sky I make with photos of mayang.com. The sun light was a test, in first moment I think so good, but, like alfienoakes says, seems a biblical scene ahahahahah In new image, I cut this effect =] In center of construction, have lights. Glued on the roof. And, in base of coluns of wood, have points of lights in floor Thanks for all coments. Rodrigo http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/6923/quiosque2low.jpg Last edited by Rick Eloy; July 3rd, 2009 at 11:41 AM. Reason: Please, see forum rules. |
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