ZFact Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 Please rip this image apart and let me know what problems you think could be resolved. No photoshop work done on the image yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZFact Posted October 4, 2009 Author Share Posted October 4, 2009 Rough update - black gloss toned down a bit and floor replaced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Hamelrijckx Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 ...bricks on the wall are a bit too large I think, and displacement just a bit too heavy. Background perspective doesn't match (camera's looking up to the buildings while you have a straight horizontal view inside), background lighting doesn't match neither. The lighting balance altogether has a strange look as well; contrast between sunlit and shadow pieces is too weak, and the lighting inside the cooker hood gives too much visible light for a daytime and sunny day. But it's fun tweaking that in Photoshop now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neil poppleton Posted October 4, 2009 Share Posted October 4, 2009 the scale somehow is wrong the foreground seats and worktop dont seem the same scale as the wall units at the back ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kdallons Posted October 16, 2009 Share Posted October 16, 2009 There are a couple of small annoyances that I can't get past. A chess set? I don't know about you, but I don't know many people who have chess sets in their kitchens...maybe replace it with a newspaper? Or because there's wine, maybe a cheese board with fruit on it? three wine glasses is weird too. It was the first thing I noticed...I don't want it to seem like you ran out of ideas for countertop stuff and stuck another wine glass in there because you already had them modeled. The photos of the children have an odd placement. I wouldn't put the third one down so low to the floor. I'm not sure what is on top of the fridge...a bowl? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlotristan3d Posted October 17, 2009 Share Posted October 17, 2009 it would be nice if you can tell us a bit about your software, machine, rendering time, etc.the composition bothers me, there's an awful lot of empty space on the right side floor. i would lower the camera to 1.3m and maybe pan a little bit to the right. the chrome and s/s material doesnt look to convincing. specially the bse of the stool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
braddewald Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Bricks make the scene look fake. Background image doesn't match perspective. Kids photos are kind of weird, too. Lower the camera height. Countertops are extremely thick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tgsamson Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 The chairs look uncomfortable and the twin hoods over the range look too industrial. Also, speaking as a busy wife and mother, the twin hoods look impractical and just like more surface to have to clean. But the flooring is nice and the overhead cabinets look good over the appliances. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyle Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 What is happening with the radiator near the kid's photos in the corner. Can someone clean it please? Image doesn't have enough contrast. Floor tiles look too big. Composition and camera angle are out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al Hart Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 Is there any internal lighting anywhere? I expected to see more shadows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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