nodar1978 Posted October 19, 2009 Share Posted October 19, 2009 hello guys here is a test render of atrium. thanks in advance for your comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slanier Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 (edited) really cool, i like this shot. I like the small study area in the back. things i would work on for your final: maybe add some slight volume light fog coming from the open ceiling? I noticed the ceiling planks running from left to right and to the back have a lot of repeating, maybe spend some time randomizing the uvs to breakup the pattern. I don't know how well the white cutout rug is working, I didn't know what it was at first... then again I'm not too keen on contemporary interior design. Other than that I like it, cool lighting, lots of interest. great work keep it up! Edited October 20, 2009 by slanier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
navnow Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 i feel the area below Tea table is tooo bright.. ... and nice render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nodar1978 Posted October 23, 2009 Author Share Posted October 23, 2009 thank you for coments guys, here is a last render for atrium and one for an other room of same building Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
braddewald Posted October 26, 2009 Share Posted October 26, 2009 Sunlight is a little too sharp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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