dagii Posted January 22, 2010 Share Posted January 22, 2010 Hello, I'm studying interior designs and for the one subject I had to create a kitchen... I work in sketchup and twilight render... I know it's nothing special, but we work on it in school. I'd love to know 3dmax but ... maybe next year... sooooo this is my kitchen...... don't be too cruel Regards, Daga Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acjwalker Posted January 22, 2010 Share Posted January 22, 2010 Great start, keep it up. Teh floor is incredibly blown out, well everything which is white is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BillyElNino Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 (edited) Great start, I can't help you with the renderer, never heard of it, but one thing I would say, lose the teapot, its too old fashioned as well as being MASSIVE! Possibly think about adjusting your camera lower to an eye level shot too, its maybe a little high here? Around 1650mm off FFL should be about right? The blowing out of the white areas, as said above, also needs reducing as well as some re-working of the cooker hood material, its too basic at the moment. either add more modeling to it or substitute it for an extractor from the Google Warehouse. Edited January 26, 2010 by BillyElNino Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heni30 Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 Hi, Off to a great start. Just needs some tweaking! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimy Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 Maybe put something in the foreground, like a central bench, to add depth. Foreground, midground and background is a good way of breaking up your image to add depth and interest. The lighting might be more effective from more context sensitive sources. Like the wash and falloff from pendant lights, backlit panels above benches or the wash of light from a door way etc out of frame. And of course the blown out bits as mentioned. It's good to have a slight gradient in lights no matter how bleached they are, try not to push it to full white throughout. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy Burns Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 Nice start you will love 3D max when you begin to use it. One thing that really jumps out at me is the height of the sink and hob counter, should this not be at 900mm it seems very low at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
braddewald Posted January 27, 2010 Share Posted January 27, 2010 I would: 1: Lower the camera height 2: Swap the background pic for something that isn't sloping downward 3: Delete the teapot 4: Add Ambient Occlusion 5: Try to get rid of that blown out spot that's dominating the floor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manojglobal Posted February 19, 2010 Share Posted February 19, 2010 Dear Daga, pretty good There are lots of techniques to improve your modelling, and I suggest that you try looking at the many tutorials on YouTube. I look forward to seeing your improving skills. Kind regards Manoj Singh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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