Challenge #5 - WIP 01 - supaslims

nisus · April 5th, 2003

Hi, this was my first attempt at one of the monthly challenges and i must admit it was a bit strange working in the process it required. but anyway here it is. By the way the image is set on Swanston Street in Melbourne. Spent a couple of hours on this one so some feed back would be great. I think my perspective is in need of some tweeking!

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nisus · April 5th, 2003

whooops sorry Nisus, i didnt think to add the title to the image in here. It is quoted on the image i posted to cgchallenge.com if thats any consilation....anyway i'll remember next time, sorry.

*** original message from supaslims recreated by nisus ***

nisus · April 5th, 2003

Since i forgot to apply the architechts credits in a previous post i thought i should place the required image here. Anyway here it is again. Composited into a photograph taken by myself on Swanston street in Melbourne, a popular place for performance artists and instalation artists to display their work. I need to work a bit on the perspective and im afraid it's not quite tall enough...thoughts anyone?

*** cut'n paste from somewhere to here (original text by supaslims) ***

nisus · April 5th, 2003

Hi supaslims,

I've recreated your WIP01-post into your personal spot (here) because posting in other peoples wips was a bit too confusing

rgds

nisus

websmythe · April 25th, 2003

> Spent a couple of hours on this one so some
> feed back would be great. I think my perspective
> is in need of some tweeking!

Personally, I really like your sense of composition and lighting. It works really well. Perspective? Tweaking is the key word, not rebuilding. Nice one.

nisus · April 28th, 2003

Hi Supaslims,

A very quick comment: Try to compensate some of the foreground (bare sidewalk) for some more sky

rgds

nisus

supaslims · April 30th, 2003

ok...i say stick a fork in me!...im done!

no more time to work on this but im generaly happy with the results [img]cool2.gif[/img]

April 5th, 2003	#1 (permalink)
nisus Super Moderator Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Gent Flanders Belgium Europe Age: 34 Posts: 3,286 Name: Evert Vandenberghe	Hi, this was my first attempt at one of the monthly challenges and i must admit it was a bit strange working in the process it required. but anyway here it is. By the way the image is set on Swanston Street in Melbourne. Spent a couple of hours on this one so some feed back would be great. I think my perspective is in need of some tweeking! * created by nisus to make sure every WIP has its own topic * __________________ www.ams.be / www.nisusarts.com http://www.youtube.com/profile_videos?user=nisusCGA&p=r

April 5th, 2003	#2 (permalink)
nisus Super Moderator Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Gent Flanders Belgium Europe Age: 34 Posts: 3,286 Name: Evert Vandenberghe	whooops sorry Nisus, i didnt think to add the title to the image in here. It is quoted on the image i posted to cgchallenge.com if thats any consilation....anyway i'll remember next time, sorry. * original message from supaslims recreated by nisus * __________________ www.ams.be / www.nisusarts.com http://www.youtube.com/profile_videos?user=nisusCGA&p=r

April 5th, 2003	#3 (permalink)
nisus Super Moderator Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Gent Flanders Belgium Europe Age: 34 Posts: 3,286 Name: Evert Vandenberghe	Since i forgot to apply the architechts credits in a previous post i thought i should place the required image here. Anyway here it is again. Composited into a photograph taken by myself on Swanston street in Melbourne, a popular place for performance artists and instalation artists to display their work. I need to work a bit on the perspective and im afraid it's not quite tall enough...thoughts anyone? * cut'n paste from somewhere to here (original text by supaslims) * __________________ www.ams.be / www.nisusarts.com http://www.youtube.com/profile_videos?user=nisusCGA&p=r

April 5th, 2003	#4 (permalink)
nisus Super Moderator Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Gent Flanders Belgium Europe Age: 34 Posts: 3,286 Name: Evert Vandenberghe	Hi supaslims, I've recreated your WIP01-post into your personal spot (here) because posting in other peoples wips was a bit too confusing rgds nisus __________________ www.ams.be / www.nisusarts.com http://www.youtube.com/profile_videos?user=nisusCGA&p=r

April 28th, 2003	#6 (permalink)
nisus Super Moderator Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Gent Flanders Belgium Europe Age: 34 Posts: 3,286 Name: Evert Vandenberghe	Hi Supaslims, A very quick comment: Try to compensate some of the foreground (bare sidewalk) for some more sky rgds nisus __________________ www.ams.be / www.nisusarts.com http://www.youtube.com/profile_videos?user=nisusCGA&p=r

April 25th, 2003	#5 (permalink)
websmythe Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: UK Posts: 24 Name: Aidan Beck	> Spent a couple of hours on this one so some > feed back would be great. I think my perspective > is in need of some tweeking! Personally, I really like your sense of composition and lighting. It works really well. Perspective? Tweaking is the key word, not rebuilding. Nice one.

April 30th, 2003	#7 (permalink)
supaslims Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Australia Posts: 44 Name: Matthew Dunn	ok...i say stick a fork in me!...im done! no more time to work on this but im generaly happy with the results [img]cool2.gif[/img] __________________ "When there is no more room in hell the dead will walk the earth"

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