First interior

Hello, this is my first interior scene and I'm asking some comments. (the tile behind the kitchen is abit continuous but I'm going to fix it later).
This is made with mental ray. There is one omni light behind every window (3) and one spotlight which is the sun.


interior

Hi Mikko,

Overall, I like it. The couch and the camera angle are the only things I don't care for. The materials are very good with the exception of the couch and the tile pattern, which you had already mentioned.

<can u pls try 2 attach it here in cgarch? ur site is blocked on this side of the world.

:confused: site blocked!

Thanks Fran. I will make the couch, the tile and the camera angle again...


Site is blocked? :eek:

What a hell... well anyway, here is the attachment.

Hi, for your first render interior, not bad!, i think you must need to desaturate the image, the flat colours (red and blue) looks like has no material on it, for flat colour materials just try to use some noise maps with 2 similar colours and small size, and more desaturated......

LETS go AHEAD!!!!!!

1st interior? youve done your job well, it is quite good..

- try to lessen the number of those bottles on top of your cabinet
its too much.
- try to soften the color of your chairs frame its too pure..

nice start.
reduce bottles. correct the angle it looks like rolled. add details to furniture colors. good start again.

let me add, nice floor..

Very nice job. The combination of the camera angle and the bottles makes the scene feel unsettling, as though the bottles are going to fall down. The bottles along the wall don't seem to have enough depth, dimension.

pmanahan