Korean House

[Laszlo Csanyi]

Studio/Institution: Laszlo
Genre: Other
Software: 3ds max
Description:

Hello,

A small project in my freetime. Perhaps I will finish this one finally.
Comments and critics are welcome

[LUMINA Architecture]

I think you must add some furniture and live. I don't like the textures and some image don't have a good composition. You can improve lights, colors etc. in post production.

[Mariana Caprio]

The fact that the sky is clear but the house looks dark gives me the impression that it's in the middle of some kind o forrest. Those rocks look a little bit missplaced. Your grass looks great. Perhaps you should add more light, it would help the whole thing look better and show up more. Great job though.

[Laszlo Csanyi]

Hi,

Thank you for the replies. Here are the final images. I don't want to spend any more time on this image. I have another project now
But your thoughts are right. Unfortunately I had only few hours in the evenings. I still could work a lot on this one. But it was a very good practice.

Korean_Cam05_night_large.jpg
Korean_Cam04_large.jpg

[Violet Jaloszynska]

Right now, the darker sky is more suitable. It looks better.

[Laszlo Csanyi]

Thanks

[Dimitris Tolios]

Needs more light - either globally or through more / stronger lights on the porch and through the house.
Right now it doesn't look as something "desirable" - more like a house from a thriller movie that intrigues you yet scares you.

More warm light will make the scenes more lively and inviting.