christophritler Posted March 16, 2015 Share Posted March 16, 2015 Studio/Institution: PrivateGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: Blender – CyclesDescription: Here is what I did after two weeks of practice. The second piece ever made, the first I made without guidance. Getting your honest feedback and some tips would be great. Thank you in advance! Regards Christoph Credits: Logs made by Danilius (BlendSwap) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smile of Fury Posted March 16, 2015 Share Posted March 16, 2015 (edited) Hi Christoph, I think it looks pretty good. A few small things for me: 1. try to chamfer or round off the edges of the brick wall, they are very sharp. 2. same brick wall, see if you can get the brick rows to align as the turn the corners 3. The bottom of the red label bottle on the counter looks like it's in the counter. Maybe raise it up? 4. I like how the left side is overexposed, but maybe bring it back a little so we can see more shadows coming from the window counter. Edited March 16, 2015 by Smile of Fury Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christophritler Posted March 17, 2015 Author Share Posted March 17, 2015 Thank you for writting to me! You are completly right! I will afjust those things you are mentioning. I think they will improve the result! I'll rerender to exr format, I rendered straight to png, it would be nice now to adjust some of the lighting in post production... I'll show the result later this week. Thanks again. Regards Christoph Gesendet von iPhone mit Tapatalk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christophritler Posted March 17, 2015 Author Share Posted March 17, 2015 Thank you for writing to me! I think you are completely right. I will adjust those things and post back the result. I'll try to render to exr this time, adjusting the lights in post production would be nice now… Thanks again. Regards Christoph Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ivanjay Posted March 20, 2015 Share Posted March 20, 2015 For some reason I am not seeing the image in here through tapatalk but would love to check it out. Can you repost? Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christophritler Posted March 20, 2015 Author Share Posted March 20, 2015 (edited) Sure, let's try! Didn't had the time to rework the image thought … but here it is again. And the "raw" rendered image (no post production). Regards Christoph Edited March 20, 2015 by christophritler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christophritler Posted March 20, 2015 Author Share Posted March 20, 2015 Sure, here it is! Had no time to rework the image thought … Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christophritler Posted March 20, 2015 Author Share Posted March 20, 2015 And here the "raw" footage … Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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