khaledbou Posted June 22, 2015 Share Posted June 22, 2015 Studio/Institution: BLEAKClient: CONFIDENTIALGenre: OtherSoftware: SKETCHUP , 3DS MAX , VRAYWebsite: http://NOT YETDescription: Hi guys,I am new here I'm making some renders of a pool project for client any tips/advices to make this look more attractive are very welcome let me know how can I make it better the render : http://img11.hostingpics.net/pics/631822int01.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
takare Posted July 20, 2015 Share Posted July 20, 2015 I agree with the comments from poly. In addition I would look at adding some lounge style chairs with towels or other pool items to the bottom left corner to fill the space (without becoming too busy) and force the viewers eyes back towards the center of the image. Right now it is an open space and makes it feel unbalanced. The lighting is the biggest item though. It currently feels cold since the light source is blue. Look for some images online to see how adding some white or yellow lighting can dramatically change the mood in the image. You could also try running a filter or color adjustment layer in post. Good luck and post more images as you progress. Overall it is looking really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dollus Posted July 20, 2015 Share Posted July 20, 2015 shiny pool deck = slippery = horrid design. research non-slip tile appearance Also, fill the pool. Perimeter gutters like you have shown work by skimming water off the surface. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khaledbou Posted July 20, 2015 Author Share Posted July 20, 2015 Hey guys, thanks for commenting, I totally agree with what you said, unfortunately the project was over long ago, I had no time te re-render so I did some fixes on post to make it feel more alive, for the composition: the camera angles were the choices of the client, otherwise I'll chose a better perspective here is the other ones; the client liked the final one http://img15.hostingpics.net/pics/514555int0202.jpg http://img15.hostingpics.net/pics/379434int0102.jpg http://img15.hostingpics.net/pics/664755int04.jpg have a nice day ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khaledbou Posted July 20, 2015 Author Share Posted July 20, 2015 I almost forget about artifical lighting thanks man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khaledbou Posted July 20, 2015 Author Share Posted July 20, 2015 thanks bro!! check this I think it's better than the first http://img15.hostingpics.net/pics/664755int04.jpg http://img15.hostingpics.net/pics/514555int0202.jpg http://img15.hostingpics.net/pics/379434int0102.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoodleLuff Posted July 21, 2015 Share Posted July 21, 2015 Hey - looks like a good start. I would agree with others here and also add the colour balance seems slightly off to me. the roof and floor feel very purple and the pools very cyan by contrast. Maybe something more like this... and when you add interior lights it will help too.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TomD_Arch Posted July 22, 2015 Share Posted July 22, 2015 shiny pool deck = slippery = horrid design. research non-slip tile appearance Also, fill the pool. Perimeter gutters like you have shown work by skimming water off the surface. I was just thinking this as I looked through the post. I think a few splotches of water on the deck might be good looking. There was a "Making of..." maybe a year ago of an office building and parking lot right after a rain storm. The person showed how they created the little pools of water and reflection, maybe something like that??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khaledbou Posted July 22, 2015 Author Share Posted July 22, 2015 hi guys thanks much for you're advices, here is the other ones, hope they're better PS: Alain Mehmet what you did with the color balance is EPIC ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
khaledbou Posted July 22, 2015 Author Share Posted July 22, 2015 I personally think that the colours you put on the visual are not making it better. same as flares. Alain Mehmet has sent you picture with desaturated ambient colours and it looks a lot better. The second thing are these full suit wearing individuals. They look very strange on pool. Have you ever seen man like that walking at the pool? Jacuzzi is looking nice, same as gym (except the over saturated ambient colours) You have put more people in the pool and walking- that is good (except the ones wearing suits) My tip would be making it more natural not putting 'effects' on it. poly HAHAHA now that I think about those wearing suits ... it's weird indeed the people I've found on google, most were in outdoor pools and so they had hard shadows and unconvenient lighting ... and ... unatural colors on renders doesn't look always bad, you have to check the renders done by 'Beauty and the bit' thanks Poly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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