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I would consider exploring the space with different camera angles to take advantage of the ceiling. It has a nice rhythm and may be better used by seeing it from a different angle. If the focus of the image is the overall space than let's see more of the space. Right now the camera is focused on the space between the two desk spaces and we are starring at the storage unit in the center of the image. This leaves the image unbalanced since the negative space on the left side does not work with everything else that is on the right. If the camera needs to stay where it is at then the adjustments from poly would help (moving the calendar). I like the wall clock feature. I would explore a camera framing that feature better. One overall comment on textures. We as people like reflective surfaces. This space is missing that element. Try a little reflection on the floor. Best of luck.

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