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Residential interior in Switzerland


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Studio/Institution: VisualPieces
Genre: Residential Interior
Software: 3ds max, Vray, Photoshop
Website: http://www.visualpieces.com/
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Hi!

I need some suggestion and critique about this residential interior.

I would greatly appreciate any constructive comments!

thanks!

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Hey...

 

First thing I would say is that the outside seems very blue. Would be nice to see the colour of the mountains coming through the blueness a bit. Also, I think you can push the contrast in the image a lot more... see attached. But otherwise, looking nice

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Thanks Alain,

The client wanted a more washed image.

I agree with your comments.

In this update, for my preference, I added more contrast, change the outside and add a warm filter.

Now, I dont know what else can change... jejeje

Any other suggestions are welcome!

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Looks better. I would fix that corner where everything is getting washed out. I would fake it and make sure the wood is separated from the white - especially because that's happening right in the middle of the rendering. I would keep everything but bring the original rug back - this one got too dark especially under the coffee table. I keep wondering where the lights are. Would there be some recessed cans somewhere?

 

I would put some chaise lounges in the middle of the terrace that would create a nice visual path out into the water; and it would tell more of a story of how, when the sun goes down you can chill out there with a glass of wine watching the sailboats go by.

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thanks George,

 

"I would fix that corner where everything is getting washed out. I would fake it and make sure the wood is separated from the white - especially because that's happening right in the middle of the rendering."

yes, its burned in the original outpout. I need to make the wood darker....

 

yes, the rug is very dark. Need to put a more bright material.

there are no artificial lights, except the lamps. I put some but the client, took them off.

 

I will make another version of this scene for my portfolio.

 

Any other suggestions are welcome!

 

thanks

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