Halsall Barn Conversion Rear

[adamsargeant]

Studio/Institution: AWS
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: 3DS Max 2015 & Vray 3
Description:

Just after some thoughts. The scheme has been in with planning for a couple of months but certain elements are not going down to well with the planners. As i am leaving the practice soon to go in to purely visuals (i am an arch assistant atm), i want to take the project in its current form to develop some visuals for it... As i know if it does get built, it will be a lot more bland.

 

Just after thoughts on it? My self critique is that i struggle with external (material) render/stucco. it is too pure, probably due to the reflectivity/self glossiness..

 

The cor-ten works for me though..

 

Thanks,

 

Adam

[Smile of Fury]

I think the cor-ten panels are the best part, but they're hidden by too much lens flare, compared to the rest of the image.

- Desaturate the grass or maybe replace it all with the long grass growing on the other side of the fence

- Dirty up the fence

- Put the dog running next to the man or move somewhere else

- The dirty bricks are too uniformly dirty

- Background on right too in focus

[adamsargeant]

Sound advice. I am currently setting up a scene from the rear of the garden to the barn itself so will make adjustments so both images are corrected.

 

Thanks.

 

Adam

[Jackie Teh]

The red brick size is too big i guess.

[adamsargeant]

The red brick size is too big i guess.

 

Yeah i agree. I have since changed the texture to a much more appropriate look but my laptop is struggling to re render the elements i presume because the grass objects and foliage. I will get around to it some day when i can sacrifice my laptop to just render and nothing else.

 

Thanks