Residential Park Home - Critiques please

[cedeon]

Studio/Institution: Cedeon Design
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: Blender
Website: http://https://design.cedeon.co.uk
Description:

I'm running out of time to meet the deadline for this job. I'm having one of those moments of visual fatigue so could do with some fresh eyes on this.

Please give me some critiques - stick to post production critiques please as sadly I don't have time to change 3D aspects.

 

Thanks guys

[heni30]

That tilt is a little bit too much. I would separate the buildings and adjust them so that the road doesn't become to steep. Glass in the front needs to be a little darker to read separate from the frame. The corner on the left needs some bushes/planter - very stark right now. Maybe a little more contrast on the buildings? unless you want a misty vibe. Grass with the tree in the middle is getting washed out - needs to be a little darker. good luck.

 

Here's tilt adjusted on large unit.

 

Edited March 18, 2017 by heni30

[Francisco Penaloza]

I also agree with George comments.

But honestly that street is wrong, if a developer send you those elevations, there is definatelly too much slope for a car to drive by, they will just flip not questions.

the over all image seems very cold and not inviting. I understand that this may be England but still you should try to put a little warm some place, maybe lit the interiors with warm lights or leave the shadows bluish but the bright areas a little warmer

here are some samples by MIR

http://cdn.mir.no/articles/_resampled/ScaleWidthWyIzOTkiXQ/Railway-Blaanehytter-HostTur-Beskjaert.www.mir.no.jpg

 

http://cdn.mir.no/articles/_resampled/ScaleWidthWzE4MDBd/Dorte-Mandrup-Icefjord-Center-The-Edge-update-croped-copyright-www.mir.jpg

 

http://cdn.mir.no/articles/_resampled/ScaleWidthWyIzOTkiXQ/Utopia-Lundagatan-EarlyBirds-www.mir.no.jpg

[cedeon]

Thanks guys, much appreciated.

It is on the side of a very steep hill and i was provided a 3D topo - I agree about the road though - its very steep.

Thanks for the input on the warmth. I'll see what i can do

 

Thanks again.

[alexiskleidaras]

Here is my two cents... i think the road should be flat and then you would want to keep the houses as vertical as you can. I think you should be able to do this in PHS - but i'm no expert.