software office building

[kippu]

a software office building in india

3dsmax , vray and photoshop








good day

[Dibbers]

Very nice, but get rid of the swarm of bees.

[Bhanu]

Quiet nice, design and rendering....

[skogskalle]

very cool design!

renders look nice too. I like the grass, is it vray displacement or just a good texture??

[nisus]

I don't like it. Nor the design, nor the camerviews, nor the glass...

Design: probably not in your hands
cameraviews:
- first image: too much foreground because the view is taken from too high... I suggest to take it at eyelevel... foreground shadow is distracting, not adding imho: or leave it out, or position is more balanced
- second image: better because at eyelevel, but add more foreground to at a nice atmosphere and feeling
- third image: okay

glass: so blue??? reflection??? gradients??? interior lights???

I hope this helps

rgds

nisus

[ipdesigner]

*i like the design...

[donix]

nice rendering dude. design is good also.

i think this will be much better if you improve more on your glass. add some more entourage and interior lights also.

keep it up.

[kippu]

thanks guys and good points raised by nisus ....really good .... i never thought of reflections on those glass .... interior lights yes i thought abt them but i was really cramped for time

anyway really good suggestions and i will put it in work the next time around ....thanks

[nisus]

Hi,

Tnx you liked the comments, although more 'negative' I think these critics gave more direction than only pleasing ones... ,-p

No time for interior lights???

Just add a few white dots in ps with some horizontal motionblur and screen it a bit before adding the glass ,-) It's a matter of 5-10 seconds...

About the design... I like the setup in the first picture, but I dislike the glass box to the righthand side because it makes the design inconstistent...
Second image: same thing + feeling of a rectangular box in the cylinder to the right
Third image: to the left is a really good architecture of pointless desing... It's a box, an almost moebiusring with bad curving all together... It looks like no one could decide during the designproces untill someone came up with the marvellous idea to combine it all in one... Do we really believe the sum is better than the individual parts??? ,-p

rgds

nisus

[kippu]

right about the design part .... well i leave it to the architects to think about the sum of all parts or individual but its something apart from the boxes and windows so hey i like it .......

and thanks for the tip on the lights

the whole thing took about 3 days so there was no time for the lights