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A second version the first render. A version of night. I like it 50%. I don't get to see where the mistakes are. I will have to learn and practice more and more.

Tom, the cow is only a detail. I have changed it to the background to do it least important, more back. About the tiling issues in the concrete, I tried to improve it in Photoshop. I am agree about the legibility issues on the front. I didn't see it. I have given more importance to the different element: blinds facades, floor structure and glass railing. Giving it a easy legibility and clear, I hope. Thank you Ernest, for your tips. I have changed the glass and cloud like you told me. Also I have changed the general ambient of the render, to do a second version of it. I will Play with the render more to get better vesions.

Studio/Institution: http://aarkitectura.blogspot.com.es/ Genre: Other Software: 3ds Max + Vray + Photoshop Website: http://aarkitectura.blogspot.com.es/ Description: Hi everyone!! Here my last work. This render has been done only to practice and improve my skills. A building without use in wherever. Feel free to critique it and show me the mistakes that I can't see. I suppose that they will be a lot. Thank you.

Thank you for your help. I think I have a long way :-) but with the practice I think that I will get better imagen. I will use all this tips. P.D.: I am from Murcia (Spain) and Of course Paco de Lucia, the best guitarist of spanish guitar ... a pity.

Ok about it is details. I am amateur and I have to improve more and more, I am in this world less than one year. But I think is not so much dreary. Maybe I need to habituate my eyes to see this mistake. The next time I will try to think in all this thing and to do the imagen more attractive. About the project, this was for a competition in 2010 and I took it to practice my skills. And of course, I could have been better about roofs, woods, windows, form, etc.

About the first imagen, I think it isn't dreary. Some partners told me that it is a cheerful image and I think so. Maybe the renders to backlighting is a bit stranger, but I want to emphasize the form of house with this ilumination and fill the square with shadows.

Studio/Institution: Aarkitectura Client: NFO Genre: Commercial Exterior Software: 3ds Max + Vray + Photoshop Website: http://aarkitectura.blogspot.com.es/ Description: Hello everyone! Here my last work. It´s a hotel + wine museum in Croatia. The project was made for the office NFO (Zagreb) in 2010. I have done two view. I like the first one more, with which I think I have improved my skills a bit. The second is ok, but I think there is a bit mistakes that I don´t know how to get it better (maybe the imagens that I have used to create the enviroment). I will continue practicing ...

Thank you Jens Andersen for your advice. I will improve it. it is difficult to see these mistakes because my eyes haven´t learnt to see it. Little by little

Studio/Institution: NFO Client: NFO Genre: Residential Exterior Software: 3ds Max + Vray + Photoshop Description: Hello everyone!! Here the new view that I have done during the last month. The project is for NFO office of Zagreb (one month ago I showed other view) This is the same view but with 3 different version: Sunny day, deep fog and night. I have done the different version to improve my skills. little by little :-). I did the model in Sketchup, rendering in 3ds max + Vray and post-produced in Photoshop (the process more lasting). Here my blog: http://aarkitectura.blogspot.com.es/

After some hours this weekend trying to improve the render thank you to your help, this is the result. I think that I haven't gotten to improve it much. With time and practice, I will go having better skills. I have changed the reflexion of building, brought down the saturation of grass and trees and others characteristics, changed the sky for other more atractive, changed the glass, etc. All this in Photoshop, because I am amateur in 3ds max and Vray and my computer isn´t good (Jaimie, the next time I will try put more thing inside to the building).

Thank you Jaimie!! Thank for the help. Sometime it is difficult to find somebody who can help you about it. I note all. I will start to try to improve it this weekend, I hope to improve it because I am like boy giving the first steps. I will tell you soon ...

Hi Peter, Thank you so much for your advices. I am going to change all you tell me and I will try to improve it. I have to learn to look at better my draws. And of course, take more time to look at other exterior renderings. I will publish in this post again the rendering if I can get to improve it .. I know also that the Architecture visualizacion´s world is a way hard and long.

Studio/Institution: Aarkitectura Client: NFO Genre: Residential Exterior Software: 3ds Max + Vray Website: http://aarkitectura.blogspot.com.es/ Description: Hello everyone!! This is my first post and here I show you my last rendering. I made it in 3ds max + Vray and post-produced in Photoshop. This is a render for a house in Zagreb, made for the office of arquitecture NFO of Croatia (nfo). I have done it to improve my skills. The problem is that I need to improve more and more and I need someone who can give me some advices. You can criticize me, if you have some of time. What would you do to improve it? Here the same render, but in better resolution. http://imageshack.com/a/img89/7017/kgkk.jpg Thank you so much. If you want to see another of my proyects, you invite you to visit my blog http://aarkitectura.blogspot.com.es/

Hi, My name is Antonio and I am from Spain. I am Architect and from June I have tried to learn and improve my skill around the world of architectural visualizacion. I started using Artlantis to render, modeling in Sketchup. But now I am starting to give my first steps in 3ds max + Vray. The big work in my renders I do always in Photoshop. Thank