danhogman

Something is not right, windows are too bright and do not reflect what's facing them. The backround has good contrast and hightlights, but the house does not. It should be the other way around.

Turn the red car just a bit to the left, so you can see a but of the side of the wheel! Wheels are just as important as the headlights!

Nice soft light and shapes. Is this a personal project? Given the size and the simple design content, I cannot imagine a client paying for a good amont of time just to see his bed in 3D. But maybe is just me.

The exterior is great! you might want to crop a bit from the sides to focus on your building. Also, the two people across the street are tiny!

Indeed, it is off scale. Just look at the size of the garage doors versus the street width. You could also photshop out the electric wires ans possibly the fence.

Hi-tec bedroom? Not too warm and welcoming as a bedroom is supposed to be, but nice renderings after all

You do need to spend more time with the environment, working out the sky and grass. I noticed the soft shadows you are using, even the angle of the sun is not the most fortunate one.

The building is vertical, but floor is tilted. I would fix that first. Great simple composition

Great work, a bit of photoshoping wouuld help a lot. you might want to make it a bit warmer and give it some shiness and reflection, considering the materials that you are using.

Great classic look. I like the location of the camera and the framing, you have good eye for this.

Both images are great. I do think you need a bit of work on the lights. Are the images stretched a bit horizontally or is just me?

great rendering overall, I think the first street lights is too close and too big. Also, you might want to show a little bit more of the street andprobably less obvious people.

Good rendering, I feel that it might need some more light. Actually, the whole color tones are a bit unusual, but it might be my monitor.

I'd prefer to set the camera a bit higher, to see more of the floor and less of the ceiling. This would specially apply to the first image.

I'd prefer a more "ancient" environment around this building. Two guys in suit make me think they are in front of a convention center.