karloalvarez

In the HDRI image the windows are overexposed and i think that the white dots is about the material subdivision change to 32,to correct te overexposition,you could change the color mapping to Reinhard

Depends about the ability of the artist,the fee of the render is about your effort and time,there is a way to sell your render,that i thinks probally should work in your in this case,"charge for days" only you know what is the price about your time(T) and effort(E) and convert this in the time and effort for "1" day,put a value for 1 day,if you say that this render scena have been made in just 3 hours,then divide the (T) and (F) of the day in the time that you have to work to produce this scena,your could add more variables to the ecuation,taxes,transport,etc,etc,this is just a sugerence,works for me!

Ok Marcellus,maybe the color balance have a lot of blue an this need little yellow side,and the stone path is overexposed and this is one of the most important parts in photo composition,is the nearest element.think wooden close tratment is great,and the work with grass also is balanced; Keep in work with a correct sky in 2 photo.

Hi Anna,y think that the image concept is good;3 thins to take care: 1.The texture of walls is to much bright for a night shot. 2.The color of windows lights is saturated and duplicated, exactly the same. 3.roof lights dont have origin,and garden lights look plane. If you use vray sun in evening,take care about the position of sun,i think that this image just need artificial lights because the chairs shadows and the temperature of lights indicate that is a dark night. Make a cool light balance with windows lights correct balance in yellow to white scale,the windows could have curtains also. For lights sources in roof use a vraylightmtl and for the garden lights use a a reflective mat in the body of lamp,to have more interesting texture in it. I made some correction in levels and contrast PS in the image. Keep in work,good image

Hi Hardy im new here,but i have to say that the image is good,have a clear composition a a good interpretation of light in scene,just i have few observations about the render,first the guitar have a IES light on the top but where is the lamp,the texture on the wall need to have more ittinerancy,looks in patterns specially on top of bookshelf,clearly i can see 4 patterns,maybe the scene need a lit bright. Just no more congrats for your work

Hi Anna,I have to say that the photo composition is great,the color balance is adecuate and shades-textures work is good;Just i think you need to correct the wather turbulance,for a flat and small superficie the wather should be calm;also the artificial light an natural need to be reflected in the pool,and the shades in dark places need to be realized.

Hi Syril,first that all I congratulate,because the use of the textures is well done,and the choose of the structure colors is great too,i think the best perspective is the principal one,the render composition is perfect just i think it needs alit bit of colors balance,because the structure i so black and the sky have a lot of satturated scales of blue my sugerence is just to desaturate the sky to make a better color balance in composition and personally i dont like the black tonal clouds,once again congrats,good manage of textures.

Hi Satwinder I think the render is great have a correct ilumination that make bathtub the principal element in the render,personally the color of the floor tiles should be satturated and take a cleaner material,but i think the principal confusion in the composition should be the perspective,personally i think the render should be great if the axes in compositions make comes orthogonal and the roof should be more effective if the camera go up to the perspective,the render needs more roof. I dared to use your photo to make clear my point. Congrats for share your work!

First that all,i have to say that the render is great,just need a little of elements that make strong the 3d effect of the perspective,like other lamps near to the cam,another thing is the white balance,is too strong,some parts of composition needs more contrast,like the floor and the table near to the window. I dared to use you render to make clear my sugerences. Congrats Chris

Studio/Institution: Karlo Alvarez Genre: Commercial Interior Software: 3dsmax_Ps Description: Im new in archviz,and this render is my first attempt to prorender;,I know that the image needs some corrections and critics to make a better work. Thanks for comments!

Hi to everyone inthis forum,im glad to share my work,and learn from your experience!