Thanks for the feedback, not taken as rude, that's the reason i've posted, i know its not the best image, just need a little help putting my finger on the main issues.
Like you said, i don't have much design input so full height windows, canopy etc. will be a struggle, however, it can be a discussion.
I will work on the camera, i normally do set it at eye level, can't remember my reasoning for raising it on this one to be honest.
What would you say is the best way to get decent reflections while using a daylight system? i often use a HDRI but struggle getting shadows out of them.
I often feel my images are a bit washed out, any thoughts? i've played around in photoshop but cant seem to get the colours looking right.