That's more like it! Well The first image seems 100% more appealing than the second one! It has an atmosphere and the person at the back seems to play a role of his own!
Where you stop the manipulation of an image, is sometimes difficult to understand when you are a beginner!
Till now I like the image I see! I do not think you are far!
Kind regards,
Antonis.
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