Nice images...but too clean for my taste. The house needs more structure (dirt) NOTHING is that clean and smooth !!!! The scale of the people look wrong too (especially in the last pic) That guy in on the left does not fit in that view and the 3 people talking are way too big compared to the cars in the background...Did u do dummies to scale the people right ?..The Ivy looks weird on that wall better delete it and have a "clean" concrete wall with graffitti (he he !)......Besides all the above...nice job !!!
Nice images...Really nice. I just have 2 things that really bother me. The fence around the roor terrace. It looks as if you can ran a car into it and it won't break. I think you should make it much slimmer so it looks more "light" ! The tiles on the roof terrace floor looks way too much like an image (your other textures are much better than that !)...Ow one more thing. The wood in the roof terrace view (one the flower beds) looks weird...it's too clean...where are the "knots" that usually are in wood..lack of structure in those boards..... BUT besides that...great images !!!!
Hmmm look at the scale of people, lamps (too small), trees (or is it a bush ?), (reflections in windows vs. the sky used) more contrast between the different mats; looks like the materials flow together (colors are too similar) Nice model !
Studio/Institution: Årstiderne Arkitekter Client: private developer Genre: Commercial Exterior Software: max, vray, CS5 Website: http://aarstiderne.dk Description:
An office building i did a while ago for a private developer. Comments are welcome
Well...the transparent people is a way that my colleagues and i use to give the viewer the impression that lot's of people are moving around in our image (dynamic people...we also gave them motionblur to emphasize this impression) I don't understand the thing about the horizontal line u refer to. If it's the "sunscreen" on the elevations that are sticking out then it's just a way to show that we might put an overhang there but we are not sure (we indicate that something might go onto the facade and hang out from it !)
Looks a bit like the styrofoam models we sometimes do in our office but as Gradzki is miss a little bit of reflections etc. on the building that we are supposed to focus on. I think the green lawn under the trees and the surface around the building is nice and simpel for this sort of image. Maybe the trees could be even simpler to emphasize the model look (non realistic look)...nice QR !!!
Studio/Institution: Årstiderne Arkitekter Client: private developer Genre: Retail Exterior Software: max 2011, vray and CS5 Website: http://aarstiderne.dk Description:
My latest creation for a small retail area in Skåde here in Denmark. I have tried to copy the "LUXIGON" and "CADMAN" styles as best as i could (i only had 8 hours for this project !). Any comments from all of U brave 3D illustrators/artists !?!?
