Amenity Center

[Allen]

Lightwave 7.5d. Onxy Tree (foreground trees and bushes). HD Instance. Interpolated Radiosity.

Getting down to the end here, any comments are welcome.

 

Thanks.

[karl zacharias]

not to crazy about the torn edges on #1...the sky seems to over-powering on the images...on the approach shot maybe you can loose one of the cars so ya could better see the entrance...have to pick #2 image as my fav...

[Allen]

Funny, that's the view my client picked a few minutes ago also. Some more work to do tonight, editing the elm trees, adding some trees, changing the fence.

 

Then to render.

 

Thanks for your input.

[Allen]

Updated last night...

[Brian Cassil]

Huge improvement! I like the anle so much more, you've obviously spent some time on the lighting and textures as well and it shows. The street could be just a little darker maybe and with a hint of reflection, and as someone else stated, I'm not a big fan of the torn edges either. I'm not sure how I feel about the NPR look, it's fine, but maybe not really necessary here.

[Allen]

Thanks, Brian.

 

To be honest...I don't know what to do about the edges of the rendering - so the torn thing is a stop gap for reviews by the client. I'll composite some trees and clone brush the street outward some see if that works.

 

I agree on the lightness of the pavement - always afraid of adding too much diffuse shading but a little tweaking needs done on that.

 

The npr was last minute, fun thing - won't go to client.

 

Appreciate the time you spent reviewing.

[ihabkal]

I actually liked view 1, it makes me want to play command and conquer...imagine tanks rolling over it and blowing the house up:)

THe new view is really good for architecture though...

[Allen]

LOL. You sound like my son. I'm also partial to high aerial views - probably too much CAD.