Brian Cassil Posted May 12, 2005 Share Posted May 12, 2005 This is a very small project for a temporary photography exhibit in an old library. I'll probably be working on this off and on for a couple of weeks. To me, it seems to be lacking a little bit of pizzaz so I wanted to see if I could get some comments on how I could improve it. Modeled and rendered in Max7.5 with FR Stage-1, and just a little post in PS. Render settings are a little low right now so please excuse some of the artifacts like the blotchy walls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted May 18, 2005 Share Posted May 18, 2005 Hey B, Great start. I like the ceiling lighting systems with the glass thingeys. I also think it is a real good foregroundto have the lettering on the wall. I would maybe take that even a bit further, and put the camera a bit closer to the wall with lettering on it at a good angle and show some depth of field focus. I do agree that the sene dose need more life. I don't know how much freedom you have given that you are most likely going off what has allready been designed. Maybe some hanging plants from that tall ceiling, or more colored photos. Looks sweet though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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