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hi guys... hope every one is well......

 

heres a quick image ive been working on for the last 4 hours, ive got till may next year to complete the whole thing which will hopfully include, interior photo-realistic interiors, animations, external photomontages, external animations, marketing material for building and websites etc.... lot of work for one guy i know but its for my final year degree so got to pull my finger out.....

 

heres the first image of the project still loads to do been working on it for 4 hours this will be just for the night animation i think.... at the moment.....

 

im hoping to keep posting images as i work on them so this thread could get quite long hoping to see a progression in my work and im sure the comments i will recieve from you guys will help

 

anyhow comments really apprieciated

 

 

cheers dan

 

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It has potential Dan. Just needs a bit more detail to crit it.

 

The lighting is quite effective as is the brick.

The glass could do with a bit of work and as you can see through glass at night (if the lights are on) some interior detail/focus would help.

 

Keep posting.

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cheers ic... i was beginning to think it was really bad with no one adding any comments cheers.....

 

yeah still got some work to do on it... actually theres loads......

 

heres an upto date image of the night and day shot as you can see still loads to do.....

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An image is always hard to crit when theres no context. Id work on the project planning as a whole first off to get more of a handle on which parts are going to be focal points for the project. A glass atrium is a big challenge for a beginner. If you are planning animation and photo-realism still work out of this model, you'll most likely end up working out of more than one file. For the stills, set up your cameras first. Then you dont end up working on stacks of detail that is never seen. Keep going though, you've made a good start. The brick mapping looks promising.

What renderer are you using?

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CHEERS TOMMY

yeah running with c4d

 

yeah im enjoying it at the moment.......

 

il post some real photos of the property when i get 5 mins..... its an old paper factory overlooking the river wear in sunderland... they pulling it down and putting new apartments up which look like every other new apartment scheme in the uk......

 

so i want to keep the building, making apartments and a 1st class bar/ resteraunt.

 

but it will be fun if i finish it... want to do all the marketing and everything which i think will give me a nice big project for my degree....

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  • 2 weeks later...

morning guys hope every one is well......

 

just adding some updates, aint done a lot on the model its self, been working on the marketing material logo for the scheme etc.... ive also added some existing photos so you can get an idea of the job....

 

still tons to do... but there starting to rip the building down so i best go take some more pics before its gone forever...

 

cheers dan

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