Broxton houses (2 out of 6)

[vertexART]

Ok, more work due, more updates from me...

These are 2 out of 6 typical houses for a catalogue.

So far the client likes them, but I am interested in your comments and critics, which one U like more, etc..

the rest will be made by the end of July, I guess.

Max & MR used.

 

Cheers

[JamesTaylor]

Good work, i like 2nd one most.

 

i think the reflections in the windows are way too bright tho.

[STRAT]

looking good, but the realism is lost by the pure cleanlyness of all your surfaces.

[chuck]

i'm not buying the lighting...it looks like the background image was taken during an overcast day, and you obviously have a sun source in there somewhere.

 

what bothers me the most is the lighting on the house though, i would play around with the sun intensity and the indirect lighting levels. it looks like the sun is too weak, and the indirect is too dark. you're losing out on detail and creating a dull lighting scheme. more contrast would be good.

 

hope that helps...

 

chuck

[enigma]

looks nice to me...

[vertexART]

Hi guys,

I was away on trip to Holland, so haven't been able to respond..

In the meantime, remaining houses were done by another person, so I am off to a new assignment.

Thanks for your comments and will keep them in mind for future work.

Cheers