Hotel Building

[jar73186]

I am working on a hotel building for work and I was wondering if I could get some feedback. I know that I need color on the building and I am going to work on the terrain. This is the first all Viz project that I have done. I usually start in Cad and import into Viz for materials. Any comments would be appriciated.

Thanks

Adam

[JamesTaylor]

it looks as if you've got the modelling process nailed. its difficult to see the detail from that distance but keep posting as you add textures and light for further C&C.

[mwhite]

I would probably extend the canopy all the way out to the edge of the island - it looks to short now. I would wrap the sidewalk all the way around the building. The entrance and exit look to narrow and should be radiused. Do you have enough parking??

[enigma]

it looks as if you've got the modelling process nailed. its difficult to see the detail from that distance but keep posting as you add textures and light for further C&C.

 

yep its hard to crit from this distance. maybe a closer view would be better.

[jar73186]

Thanks for the critique so far. The I agree that the sidewalk needs more curvature. I have to work on that I tend to bounce around from one area to another. Sorry this is another pic from the distance the building is pretty big and I can't get the whole side in one render I will put a close up on the next post. Hopefully I will have the siding modeled in and the sidewalk fixed. As for now keep the comments coming.

Thanks

Adam