hylton caslte visitor centre

[DAN212222]

hi guys hope everyone is well,

 

justa quick image ive been working on its a proposed visitor centre for a castle near my home, i know theres still a lot to work on such as the doors etc, but if you guys could drop me some comments i would much appreciate it as you guys may pick problems i would have missed cheers dan

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[Msamir]

Hi Dan

1)The walls and the floor look flat need some bump/displacement.

2)The outside environment.

3)Try working on a picture frame for the pictures hung on the wall , right now they look like a picture on piece of paper.

4)The man looks like he's squeezed(sp?) !!

5)Is there any glass in the windows ?

[Tim Saunders]

good crits from mazen. the first thing i saw was the super skinny guy. make your plane a bit wider. and yes the textures definately need wome bump. especially the walls with the horisontal wood material. mix in a subtle variation on the painted walls, they look a bit too perfect (cartoony). maybe this is part of the designers' desision and not yours, but the pictures seam like they are placed really low. you would have to kneel down to look at the bottom images.

good lighting though.