jstar730 Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 am working on interior of a food stall and this is done on max6, vray and hdri environment. c&c please. thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Nelson Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 Mmmm, now I'm hungry. Not bad! I like the strength of the colors because I'm sure it goes well with the company branding. But I would try to fix those overbright spots, and maybe desaturate just a tiny bit. I don't like the bright yellow color at the top of the image. And maybe you could work on the floor material in the front too. Tone it and its reflection down a little - put some falloff in the reflection. Nice job with the people too. The guy behind the counter is 100% perfect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edub Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 is this an actual design? isn't the grammar all wrong? Hotdog (singular) on sticks (plural)... shouldn't it either be: Hotdogs on Sticks, or Hotdog on a Stick? sorry, it just really jumped out at me... rendering looks fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jstar730 Posted August 11, 2005 Author Share Posted August 11, 2005 Tim, thanks for the comment. i was also thinking about the toning down the saturation cause it was also bothering me. a falloff would really help on the flooring. Erik, you're right about the grammar (didn't notice 'til you brought it up) but that is what the company's been using for quite a while... thanks, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ishpalsingh Posted August 11, 2005 Share Posted August 11, 2005 it doesn't look like vray render it looks like a scanline renderer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kicks Posted August 11, 2005 Share Posted August 11, 2005 cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jstar730 Posted August 11, 2005 Author Share Posted August 11, 2005 i see what you're saying kicks. the light above is too bright. it is actually located inside the mall though i wasn't really particular about the illumination outside. just wanted to let the owner see it well lit. thanks kicks... mabuhay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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