NOOXY Posted August 12, 2005 Share Posted August 12, 2005 Hello this is something i've been working on for about a day..kinda making it up as i go along..is't not finish as u can tell still have to add decorative stuff and texture it..before i render final image i jsut want u guys to let me know how my progress looks.i've never posed a finished peace in here and i'm hoping that this one will be my first..please comment and give hints on lighting, camera angles, and anything that come to mind...that i might have to work on..all sugestions welcomed cheers nooxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted August 12, 2005 Share Posted August 12, 2005 your lighting isn't too bad. the windows aren't bery convincing. you might do a few things. give some attention to the window frames. give them a little depth. also the glass itself doesn't really look like it's even there. even though you have a bright scene outside, you would see some slight highlights and subtle reflections onm the inside. maybe increase the opacity and put a ton of reflection on board. those books are pretty bright, if you end up with a dark, reflective wood desktop, that might help even things out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted August 15, 2005 Author Share Posted August 15, 2005 Ok here's an update on my model..i think i'm about 95% finished with modelling and adding stuff to it...now it's time to texture and fine tune the lighting..how's my progress guys? am i on the right track...C&c please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted August 16, 2005 Author Share Posted August 16, 2005 Starting to add some color and texturing now...is my progress ok??? nooxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 looks real good. are there some funny lines on the top surface of the desk or is it just the resolution? maybe bring your picture frames out a tad and tilt them out a bit more so you can tell they are seperate from the wall. looks great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mdbassett Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Looking good NOOXY. Your lighting is very good. I have been attempting to use Cinema 4D to create such interiors / exteriors - see link. http://www.cgarchitect.com/vb/showthread.php?t=11794 Granted mine aren't great. If only we had more time eh. M. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Cassil Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 I love the desk clutter! Overall it looks pretty nice. I think it could be a little sharper, but that may be because of low AA settings for these wips. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted August 16, 2005 Author Share Posted August 16, 2005 thanks all for all the positive and inspiring critics ima work at it and post my image when i'm done... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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