Need some Help_Suggestions ....

[Esteban Gonzalez]

Hey People......

 

i need opinons, about this residential proyect....... this work i did in about 4 hours.... yesterday....

 

 

thankssss

 

 

Esteban

EDGE archs. labs

[Bugga_Guy]

For 4 hours it is quite good.... but then again it kind of look like it was done in 4 hours.

 

Overall its very flat, and your renderings are in the place I like to call the "neutral zone" too unfinished to be realistic, too much detail to be a block model. you have to many mixed elements - ie blocked palm trees/cars standard lighting. But you have colours, bumped water etc.

 

If I were you, I would replace the blocked trees with more realistic trees (even opacity maps would look better), and same goes with the cars. Also some GI would improve it alot - or at least some fakeosity.

 

Avoid copying elements in the scene (ie shrubs, trees) if you must, at least change the sizes, place different textures.

 

Also you have squishy people - The thing about people is if they don't look proportioned correctly - DONT PUT THEM IN! The result can be very damaging. So either fix with width of the coupple or take them out.

[oyie]

not bad...lighting is good, but you have have to work on your material and texture. what happen to your peole on the 2nd image, its look like its been stretched