Crits please.

[Tommy L]

A few frames from a animation im doing. I like them, but think theyre maybe a bit lifeless. any help muchos appreciated. Viz/vray. bout 20 mins a frame (640/480)

 

Also, I dont know why there is a big line going through the rug in the bathroom? (vray dispacement)

[3da]

Tommy

 

I dissagree I think they look just fine. I've had a similar situation on a carpet using VRAy dissplacement recently, maybe someone can shed some light on the issue.

 

Christo

[Iain Denby]

Tommy

 

They look really good.

[oyie]

me too...i think they're nice

[Brian Cassil]

I think the bathroom images are fantastic! Awesome reflections in those materials. The living room doesn't stand up to the same standard though. I think the outside is way too bright and is washing out much of the interior.

[ecastillor]

awesome!

 

How long the animation gonna be?

 

Id love to see the final animation!

[kippu]

very nice ..... if that carpet is a mesh then i will say its a normal problem

[AJLynn]

Really nice, I think they're very lifeful, great use of vray in the bathroom shots. I second Brian on the living room comments - the bright light is burning out the wall there. Also, the camera angles where the viewer seems to be kneeling next to the toilet...

[Brian Cassil]

 

Also, the camera angles where the viewer seems to be kneeling next to the toilet...

 

 

Haha! I'm sure we've all spent a fair amount of time looking at our own bathrooms from that perspective! In fact, my wife would tell you that for about 6 months during her pregnancies, spent more time looking at the bathroom from that angle than any other!