wsneto Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 Hi there. Comments are welcome. Max 7.0 + Mental Ray + Ambient Occlusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vertexART Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 hi there, very nice and clean render, good work. And a good looking house too, unlike the one I am doing these days... Things I've noticed, that dark interior on 1st pic, is a bit too dark, imho, especially as U can clearly see it on the other image. What's the thing with distant palm on the 2nd pic? seems like intersecting the balcony.. but now I am being picky... great images! I love that wood! Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ricardo Eloy Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 Hi, Wilson! It's always nice to see good arch images done with MR, especially with Ambient Occlusion. 2 things that bother me, though: the palm (2nd pic) is really a bad looking model... and maybe you could use a smaller map for the grass' displacement, for this one looks huge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wsneto Posted August 19, 2005 Author Share Posted August 19, 2005 Hi there, thanks for your comments. Rick, I´ve tryied to change the palm model. Is it looking better now? And I´ve changed the grass displacement map also. Hope hearing more from you. Thanks, Wilson Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 new grass looks sweet. not sure you have to use that modeled tree anyway. maybe you just feel you have to because you buildt it yourself? is this for an animation? if not, just use the map you have next to the building. that green section under the branches is wierd. a bit distracting when everything else is done so well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wsneto Posted August 21, 2005 Author Share Posted August 21, 2005 rmaytee: thanks fou your comment, I´ll change the palmtree model for a bitmap one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msamir Posted August 21, 2005 Share Posted August 21, 2005 I think the shrubs in the second image down on the right arent fitting in the image, they arent casting any shadows and the light on it doesnt mach the light in the scene. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ricardo Eloy Posted August 21, 2005 Share Posted August 21, 2005 Agree on that. But you could easily fix it on Photoshop. Btw, would you care to share that bamboo of yours? Looks sweet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wsneto Posted August 22, 2005 Author Share Posted August 22, 2005 Hey Guys, another update. I Hope this is the final one. last call for comments and sugestions!!! Wilson Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted August 23, 2005 Share Posted August 23, 2005 well done. i'd live there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave_UK Posted August 25, 2005 Share Posted August 25, 2005 Nice I like the water, how you do water like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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