semi detach exterior

[pheeken@streamyx.com]

i just finish last night..hop to get some comment

render by brzil ,touch up by photoshop

[Larry Zasitko]

Nice clean rendering. But there are few things....

 

I would raise the viewpoint, I am not a fan of two storey buildings looking like they are falling backwards. If you want a scewed look I would rather have the viewpoint high and look down, which would give a sense of space. I would also show the complete structure instead of half.

 

How come the gate bars are vertical on one side of the pillar and horizonatl on the other? looks strange.

 

Work on textures, some look washed out a bit.

 

You need more plants to give a sense of scale.

 

Good start, post more...

 

Larry

[Tim Saunders]

glood glass. cool blue canopy. the scene is just reeeeeeeealy white. a little boring. good potential though.

[pheeken@streamyx.com]

glood glass. cool blue canopy. the scene is just reeeeeeeealy white. a little boring. good potential though.

is a old house want to make it look good only from front...this is the exiting house